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Ideas for better text desccriptions in the website

Post by Admin1 on Tue Dec 28, 2010 10:45 pm

Hi guys, I'm about to write a description for the next video that will appear in the few hours. I'll like to have some feedback from all of you about the texts that appear on the website to describe each video.
  • Are descriptions too long/short?
  • Do you usually read the full text?
  • There is any key data that you will like to know? (when it is available from the model)
  • Do you like the style of writting?

your feedback will be much apreciated! Thanks
Fran.





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Post by Admin1 on Tue Dec 28, 2010 10:47 pm

BTW the writer of the descriptions, a French guy who colaborates with me is not available this week, if there is any voluntier to write the next description please contact at support@smokingsweeties.com
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Re: Ideas for better text desccriptions in the website

Post by tumble on Wed Dec 29, 2010 12:19 pm

hey fran,

it's always good to have a decribtion of the video. the more details - the better. i always read the discribtion, cause i like to know some facts about the model. also new facts about a model which already did a video.
always appreciated facts are:
how much she smokes, how long she smokes, her age, some describtion of her smoking style(deep inhaler, long lung holds, snaps), what's her usual brand.
i personally would like to know more about the health aspect of the model. is she aware of her lungs getting black and what she thinking about it? is she out of breath quickly?
thanks!!

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Post by tumble on Wed Dec 29, 2010 6:30 pm

so where's the video? wasn't it supposed to appear today.

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Post by Admin1 on Wed Dec 29, 2010 6:39 pm

tumble wrote:so where's the video? wasn't it supposed to appear today.

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Post by tumble on Wed Dec 29, 2010 7:45 pm

i'm very curious.

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Post by Admin1 on Wed Dec 29, 2010 8:53 pm

updated! video of rebeca there
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Post by vault on Thu Dec 30, 2010 7:06 am

hey fran, written description nice but usually see everything i need to see in video captures. my take would be if it aint broke dont fix. just keep doing what your doing

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